Dr. Jamie Bondage

Name: Alexandria, but everyone calls her Alex. Age: 16 Race: Human Personality: she's a loner. Has an aweful temper and rarely lets people get close to her. due to a ...

I like this. it ends sort of suddenly, and it is just a little bit repetitive. I liked it though. Keep up the good work! Jamie

It seems too repetitve. It seems like you repeat the same almost exact wording over and over again. Like you didn't know how to make the song long enough, so ...

This was extremely good! It was a little short, but I loved it! XD Keep writing. Jamie

This was very choppy. It didn't flow at all! I liked the idea, but it was also confusing. It seemed repetitive on the chorus. I don't really know how to ...

I really like this. It was sweet and innocent! I like the story it tells. isnzt that what all girls want? :p Lol. anyways, I really liked it. I could ...

Johnathon: I chuckled and started nibbling on her ear. "If you force yourself to relax, your still tense, and it doesnzt count!"

Johnathon: I nodded. "I know. But now's not the time. Please." I nibbled on her neck. "If you don't relax, then I will force you too."

I think this is good. I don't really like the chorus. it seems too repetitive. Idk. My oppinion. Also, the second to the last verse was a bit confusing to ...

Johnathon: I looked at Liz and walked up to her, wrapping my arms around Liz and kissing her neck. "Relax. For me." **Post on eternals, plase!" Ryan: I smiled. "I'm ...

Aurora: I sighed in contintment. "Time to go swimming." I gave him his shirt back and went down to the water, smiling at him teasingly. "You coming, handsome?" I asked, ...

Aurora: I smiled. "Okay. You didn't even notice her at all?" I asked, grabbing his hand. we walked down the beach and I looked up at him. "You didn't even ...

Ryan: I sighed and kissed her. "Water!" I said. Someone rushed to get water and I held it to her lips, helping her drink. "I love you!"

Aurora: I smiled. The waitress brought the check, Colt payed, and we left. "She was pretty." I commented, looking at my feet. then I remebered I was still wearing his ...

This was pretty good. But, it sounded too much like a poem. The chorus is too repetitive. You should make it longer. give more emotion. Tell what's going on. I ...